Thursday 30 June 2016

Report Writing

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  1. Anonymous1 July 2016 at 11:44

    Hi Jack,

    Thanks for sharing your report about slither.io. I liked the way you shared your planning. Your opening paragraph stated exactly what your were going to report on. To improve your writing it would be great to check for missing punctuation and sentences that might need breaking up. Have a look at slide 8 and you will see what I mean.

    Thanks,

    Mr McAulay

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  2. Unknown4 July 2016 at 09:39

    well done I know a lot about spiders but you know more
    than me at spiders this term I have done a spider report
    to ?

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    1. Anonymous15 August 2016 at 12:24

      umm hi did you check out the other pages because that wasnt what my slide was on

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  3. Anonymous25 July 2016 at 12:33

    Awesome slide, Jack! Slither.io is my most fav. computer game of all time. My record length is 44k. Oh wait... I told you that this morning, didn't I?

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  4. Anonymous25 July 2016 at 12:34

    thanks mate you did tell me this morning

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